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Otherwise known as a scenario writer, I think...
Webcomic are free online, but most of the long running ones have been published in collections now.
Yeah, that's true. Plus for some there is a formatting issue that has to be solved one way or another.
Nah, it's not stupid. It looks kinda of cool sometimes, but don't over do it.
Heavy eyelids and weary soul
Let your mind go, trace the story
Leap down into the rabbit hole
Dream a dream of strife and glory
Beneath the gray, fireflies dance
A muted vista, wind and shade
But do not stop at just a glace
At sights begging to be surveyed
A suble glow trapped in the trees
Reflects on rivers, dark and shy
A whispered voice, a constant breeze
A soft gray blanket blocks the sky
The pipeworks are the planet’s veins
The Slumb’ring One breathes at it’s heart
It’s always dim, but never rains
Like an unchanging work of art
A marble painted on a wall
No stars to light it’s cradled form
Just lightning bugs, so bright, so small
Always the calm, never the storm
Beneath the gray, fireflies dance
A muted vista, wind and shade
But do not stop at just a glace
At sights begging to be surveyed
You’ve seen that place within a dream
You’re up now, and you are awake
But close your eyes and hold the theme
And in your mind, a form will take
Here shadows have no hold or place
A pastel planet, light and rain
Where rainbows shine on ocean’s face
And through the storm weaves sweet refrains
Scattered islands cause waves to break
Upon their shores, all frosted white
Easy to forget what’s at stake
And lose yourself in seas of light
Danger is waiting in the deep
The one who lurks there’s hungry yet
So beware if you find his keep
Lest you get tangled in his net
Sit back and listen to the song
The raindrops carry as they fall
Then grab the clouds and play along
Unlock the truth, answer the call
Here shadows have no hold or place
A pastel planet, light and rain
Where rainbows shine on ocean’s face
And through the storm weaves sweet refrains
You’ve seen that place within a dream
You’re up now, and you are awake
But close your eyes and hold the theme
And in your mind, a form will take
A sleeping world, in winter lost
A smithy smothered in the snow
A land of frogs, a land of frost
A sky with soft fires aglow
Not choked out yet from snowflakes, cold
A tree peeks out, in frozen bloom
For here the spring still has a hold
Though soon the ice will form its tomb
The lake a mirror, cold and bright
Reflecting ribbons in the sky
Auroras blue and green, their light
Caught only in dim frozen eyes
Quenched far too soon, the divine flame
The forge , useless to The Lame One
And woe to those who take the blame
His rage is hotter then the sun
A sleeping world, in winter lost
A smithy smothered in the snow
A land of frogs, a land of frost
A sky with soft fires aglow
You’ve seen that place within a dream
You’re up now, and you are awake
But close your eyes and hold the theme
And in your mind, a form will take
See smoke and steel, smell singe and spark
Heat and clockwork spin hand in hand
A barren landscape, hot and stark
But in this bleakness, something grand
A tick tick tick, as if from clocks
The cogs grind for no cause, it seems
Steel towers mirror city blocks
But outlined with dull metal beams
And far below, the world enflamed
A boiling soup of molten gold
A wild sea, it won’t be tamed
But flow, triumphant, ever bold
And the Knight will set the fire
Of anger from a blacksmith god
So break the sword and draw his ire
Be the living lightning rod
See smoke and steel, smell singe and spark
Heat and clockwork spin hand in hand
A barren landscape, hot and stark
But in this bleakness, something grand
Alice woke and sat, confused
She rubbed the dreamdust from her face
And left her memories, bemused
To sit, and never once retrace
Here's a sonnet I wrote I class once:
I got the news yesterday, and I froze
I did not say a word, nor did I cry
And at this time, the numbness only grows
Though I do not scream, or let loose a sigh.
I've gone past grief into another state
Where movement comes, though stiff and sapped of life
And thoughts still flow, untouched by love or hate
As cold as steel and sharper then a knife.
I do not care-not now, nor evermore-
That you were here, and left, not to return.
I merely grab the broom and sweep the floor
And turn my thoughts from ashes, or an urn.
I see your picture on the mantleplace
And feel a tear course hotly down my face.
And here's a more horror-oriented poem:
Listen now, a knock, a knock
Whoever could it be?
Reach the door, unlock, unlock
Then scream at what you see
“No!” you cry, “Not fair, not fair”
“You shouldn’t have got out!”
Smiling, they don’t care, don’t care
No matter how you shout
“Wait,” you plead, “Not me, not me”
“Go torment someone new!”
And they laugh with glee, with glee
That’s how they got to you!
“Help me, please, someone, someone!”
Screams echo through the house
They have had their fun, their fun
Like kittens with a mouse
Birdsong stops, she hums, she hums
Ignorant of the gore
And she hears the drum, the drum
Of knocking at her door
I shall insertthetag GENERALWRITINGDISCUSSION and GENERALWRITINGTHREAD into it so I can find it later.
I have come across a Writer's Block problem with a point in my story.
One of my antagonists of the story is actually an half-angelic entity, and she was the one to go to to bring people who died horrible or unnatural deaths back to life, and heal the wounds and deformities of those unfortunate few. Later on in the story when she is subjected to the mind raping of another one of the first antagonist monsters, she goes into a giant fit of misanthropic anger when the 1st antagonist reveals to her all of the fucked up things that humans are capable of and all of the sins that her closest friends, the protagonists, have done in their past. Eventually she erupts into a rampage and begins to kill everyone in sight.
When she faces the protagonist team that aims to stop her, she would bring back to life the people closest to them and have them fight the group under her control, and force the group to kill their best friends, or give them sentience and murder them over and over again to punish them for the sins they did not tell her they commited.
As the story progresses to the end, however, and the protagonists dismember her wings and reduce all of the possible power she has to kill people, and take vengeance upon her for all of those people she killed and the other teammate protagonists that she killed herself, she begs for her life, proclaiming that if they let her live, she shall bring back to life everyone she has ever killed, and even use her power to control them to make sure that all of the wicked souls that still inhabit the earth are never to harm others ever again, so nobody else has to die an unfortunate death at the hands of a murderer ever again.
I currently can't think of any reasons for the protagonists to say no to this offer.