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General writing discussion.
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Physical Appereance: Tall, average-weight, orange hair, somewhat skinny
Conflict he faces: Man vs. self (He's not a normal human and killed his own mother) and Man vs. Man (He's the only person with the ability to punch out a bunch of gods. And he's going to have to do it).
Attitude/Personality (Just use adjetives here): Emotionless, assholish, cunning, efficient
Change (As in, how does he change across the story): Becomes way less of an asshole and more emotional. And really goddamn good at fighting
Or "Stop falling asleep, you narcoleptic." I think for that line, try not to describe her sleeping habits so much (limit it to one or two, or nix the insult) and let the dialogue speak for itself.
Thanks!
>>One problem: You can become rather redundant when it comes to pairing your dialogue and descriptions.
I'll definitely watch out for that in the future. And go back and edit those out.
>> "Stop falling asleep, you narcoleptic."
Ew how did I let that through
Said character is a guy. His hair is pink in a slight-tip off to him being gay. And yes, it is lampshaded as to how coincidental it is.