How implausable is this situation? (NSFW)

nohaynicklibre

No, just a super effeminate and shy guy.

Girrrlllllllllls,let's play tennissss

TheConductor

Why write porn? Really, why? Why not write something that people will read and go "Wow, that Chagen sure can tell a fun story" rather than "Wow...that Chagen is a creepy looser". 

It just seems like wasted potential/

Bob

^^^OH, WELL JUST BREAK MY HEART SOME MORE WHY DON'T YOU?!? TT_TT

WHERE DID I GO WRONG!?!

Chagen

Conductor: Well, technically, to use some Gratuitous Japanese, it lies more on the ecchi side of the scale than the hardcore porn side.

TheConductor

But still, it seems like you're wasting your potential. I mean, for all I know, you could be an amazing writer.

Bob

to use some Gratuitous Japanese

I HAVE FAILED AS A MOTHER! TT_TT

-moves to Beijing to escape the shame-

Chagen

Conductor: It's just a fun thing on the side.

Snappy

If it's FILTHY SICK PORN then why does it have to be plausible?

YOU MAKE ME SICK YOU FILTHY FILTHY FILTHY BOY

Hatter

SICK SICK FILTHY BOY.

I think it's entirely up to you. I mean, most people are fairly binary in their sexuality - male or female - but if you're okay with setting up a buxom Russian foreign exchange student with a 16 inch middle finger in your hayloft, that's up to you. Personally I find the bit about your experiences with dishwashers and robot sex to be hilarious, but hey, she might find it to be a turn-on, and damn your grandfather for trying to bless your tap water in the first place. It's your life to live, and if he doesn't find hardcover novels to be erotic, then damn him twice over. If I may be so bold, I'd suggest that you dye your covers a seductive off-white color, so that when combined with your copy of "O Brother Where Arrrgh Thou" playing jazz in the background, your grandfather will bless your union in the only way he can - by stroking his lamp furiously while reciting the Pledge of Allegiance.

AHR

My math teachers reccomended that you take an easy math class in 12th grade instead of no class at all.

Why?

Because a year without learning makes your brain go all loopy.

Chagen

"SICK SICK FILTHY BOY.

I think it's entirely up to you. I mean, most people are fairly binary in their sexuality - male or female - but if you're okay with setting up a buxom Russian foreign exchange student with a 16 inch middle finger in your hayloft, that's up to you. Personally I find the bit about your experiences with dishwashers and robot sex to be hilarious, but hey, she might find it to be a turn-on, and damn your grandfather for trying to bless your tap water in the first place. It's your life to live, and if he doesn't find hardcover novels to be erotic, then damn him twice over. If I may be so bold, I'd suggest that you dye your covers a seductive off-white color, so that when combined with your copy of "O Brother Where Arrrgh Thou" playing jazz in the background, your grandfather will bless your union in the only way he can - by stroking his lamp furiously while reciting the Pledge of Allegiance."

What

Chagen

"Because a year without learning makes your brain go all loopy."

She's an artist. And a Piano player. There's no reason that she can't study while chilling.

Hatter

What?

AHR

What does being an artist or a piano player have to do with how well you remember the math classes you took senior year?

Also, studying kinda ruins the entire point of a year off.

Chagen

"What does being an artist or a piano player have to do with how well you remember the math classes you took senior year?"

I'm saying that the main focus of her education could be easily practiced at home.

"Also, studying kinda ruins the entire point of a year off."

Who said studying can't be peaceful and relaxing?

Hatter

A year off is a bad idea. At least, it would be for me. I collapse into slovenliness within about two weeks of not working or going to school. 

AHR

--shrugs--

Personally, I love school. Way better than studying. Mikane is very clearly focusing on a short term goal, instead of a long term goal. Not good. 

Bob

^^^^Not really.

Woah, triplefuckininja'd.

Chagen

I never said that she was focusing on a short term goal. How do you read that into it?

Also.

It's a fucking fetish fic for god's sake.

AHR

Taking a year off of school, straight off of highschool, naturally seems to be the result of naïvete and short term thinking.

Also, if it's just a fetish fic, why are you asking?

Chagen

In her case, it was more, "fuck, I'm not going to go straight from work overload to work overload."

And I want to maintain an air of seriousness.

AHR

Yep. Naïve and shortsighted. Just like all the kids who don't want to go to college where I live. Also, seems to have avoidance problems. How did she ever get high grades in her original school, to the point of getting a scholarship?

If I was that college, I'd revoke that shit.

Chagen

You don't even know Mikane's characterization.

And, I wanted to her to be away from her parents, while also not being too old. So she's 18: this made it so that she would be in college, which I don't want. So I used this.

AHR

--shrugs-- I don't, but what you have shown me is not promising in the slightest. It doesn't seem very plausible for a straight A student to take a year off before college, and still managing to keep a scholarship. What college does that?

Hatter

Why does she have a Japanese name?

Bob

...Mikane is a Japanese name?

Chagen, need I go back into disapproving mother mode?

Forzare

because weeaboo

AHR

Also, why don't you just make it during spring break?

Chagen

Her name isn't Japanese. It's pronounced "Mih-Kayne". If it was Japanese, it would be "Mee-Kah-Neh".

Chagen

AHR: Because the story takes place over a year.