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How implausable is this situation? (NSFW)

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  • BLASPHEMY!

    -prepares to have Chagen burned alive-
  • Everybody knows that trap with trap is best.

    Even though I actually prefer girl with trap for some reason.
  • See, Chagen? Even the resident trapoholic is admitting that women make everything better. Don't try to deny your inner heterosexual.
  • ....But trap with trap is Yaoi, not Yuri.
  • Traps are just futas without a vagina.
  • ☭Unstoppable Sex Goddess☭
    Monosexuals all up in this thread. Learn how to adapt to different sexes of partners and not reject offers from people based on their gender, you sexually autismal losers.
  • edited 2011-07-17 01:37:48
    [tɕagɛn]
    No, traps are men who look like women.
  • "Monosexuals all up in this thread. Learn how to adapt to different sexes of partners and not reject offers from people based on their gender, you sexually autismal losers."

    I dunno what you talking about, I'll fuck any attractive human.
  • ...Holy shit, me and Chagen agree on something? O_O

    Welp, that's it, my life is done over. Nothing left to do but fuck Chagen's ass till he bleeds. Bend over, I'll make this quick.
  • ☭Unstoppable Sex Goddess☭
    GOOSH GOOSH
  • No, traps are men who look like a women.

    That's only right now.

    Perhaps, in the future, people will let go of their personal assignments on males that promote (current) stereotypical masculinity, and looking like such will simply mean that they are that prett- pftahhahhahaha what the hell am I telling myself there's no way that's going to happen.
  • Well....here's the first page.

    This is just a rough draft. I already see so many places I can improve but here's the rough beginning:



    Caught By a Trap

    Chapter 1:


    “Welcome to Brack, college town of the US!”
    “Uh....yeah. Listen, I need to see where I can get housing. I'm gonna live here, not just visit.”
    “Take a left down this street, keep going five blocks, and you'll see a nice neighborhood. You should be able to get housing somewhere near there.”
    “Thanks.”

    I kicked my Ozutsu Ronin into gear, took a swig of my soda—the ice had melted and made it all watery—and drove off.

    Brack, huh? Kind of an odd name. Oh well, it was certainly peaceful. More peaceful than I expected, given that nearly everyone here was a college student. You'd think you'd be seeing frat boy parties and crazy nightlife clubs everywhere.

    As far as Brack's internet site told me, there was plenty to do here, and many people to meet. A good place for a girl like me to live. Especially to practice art and piano.

    I'm Mikane Beatrice. I'm 18, average height, kinda skinny, and my hair is a nice, long, and wavy blond. All of my family was blond anyway, so its not like I was gonna be any different. But as long as I looked good, I didn't care. I never got why marketers thought I had to buy thousands of dollars worth of makeup and crap just to look good. Last I checked, men got by fine without it.

    Back to me. I had just been accepted into college at The Wolfgang/Mikhail University of Brack. It's an art school. A pretentious art school, filled with hipsters and all other strange types. Perfect for me. I had moved up all the way from Texas to the Northern US—Canada was about only 100 miles north from Brack—and I was gonna make the best of it. But I did come a month early....

    I was driving through Brack's lush, peaceful green hills to find buy a home, but I got distracted way too easily by a nice diner. Till's. Whatever the hell that meant. It was a nice, small establishment, wood paneling all outside and a very 1950s-ish interior, at least, it looked that way from the outside. I might as well chat with the locals.

    I parked my car and got outside. I hoped some people wanted to chat with me. The place looked packed, and it seemed that everyone was talking with everyone else. How was I gonna fit in, if I'm just the new kid?

    I wasn't able to think about this, because something bumped into me from behind. I nearly fell over—well, not without being grabbed from behind as well.

    I looked back. A cute girl had saved me. Her hair was long, and blue, and quite silky. And she was more feminine than I was, for sure. She was beautiful, all right. I wanted to do some bad things to her....

    “I-I'm sorry. I must have....bumped into you....” She quivered. Her voice was slightly off.....
    “Nah. It's fine,” I said. “Just be a little more careful.”
    “I haven't seen you before. Are you new?” Her voice was still very shy and soft.
    “Yes, I am.....”
  • I want your hard, feathery cock, Bird Boy.
    Why would she automatically start listing her physical characteristics like that?
  • She's an odd person. And I've always been bad at introducing characters >_>
  • BobBob
    edited 2011-07-17 02:44:57
    Cause she's so totally goffik that she can get away with t-

    SHIT WRONG FIC DISREGARD
  • At the point I've written, her most notable characteristic is that she basically wants to fuck everyone she's met. 
  • But as long as I looked good, I didn't care. I never got why marketers
    thought I had to buy thousands of dollars worth of makeup and crap just
    to look good. Last I checked, men got by fine without it.

    lol Chagen hates girls with makeup and he writes it into his stories even when it's not relevant.
  • Actually, that was more to characterize her as not really being that feminine. And to show off her "I don't give a fuck" personality.
  • Ooh, ooh, does she wear leather and combat boots and have tons of piercings? 83
  • They're somethin' else.
    Hmm...

    Its... serviceable. A bit trite though.
  • No.

    Well, she may wear leather later...


  • Schitzo: Rough draft. This can be improved, I just always get stuck at the improving part...
  • I want your hard, feathery cock, Bird Boy.
    Does she had a short haircut and is kind of butch but still pretty <3
  • Better yet: Is she bald, yet makes up for it by having naturally feminine, exotic features? <3
  • No, her hair is mildly long.
  • I want your hard, feathery cock, Bird Boy.
    :<

    wut we said would be better :3

    I dated a girl with a buzzcut for a while. She was so adorable
  • BobBob
    edited 2011-07-17 03:03:03
    So, is it like a really long ungelled mohawk, or some unusual braids or something like that?

    -once dated a girl that looked like a really cute, slightly effeminate boy-
  • Snappy: You crazy, long hair is the best on a girl.

    And a guy.
  • edited 2011-07-17 03:08:00
    They're somethin' else.
    I kicked my Ozutsu Ronin into gear, took a swig of my soda—the ice had melted and made it all watery—and drove off.

    This whole sentence is a bit awkwardly worded.

    Brack, huh? Kind of an odd name. Oh well, it was certainly peaceful.
    More peaceful than I expected, given that nearly everyone here was a
    college student. You'd think you'd be seeing frat boy parties and crazy
    nightlife clubs everywhere.


    Try and describe what makes it peaceful. In fact in a lot of vague sentences, you'll have to try and add some small details.

    Maybe you could skip Mikane's vague self description for when the secks happens.

    You like the word Wolfgang, don't you?


    I parked my car and got outside. I hoped some people wanted to chat with
    me. The place looked packed, and it seemed that everyone was talking
    with everyone else. How was I gonna fit in, if I'm just the new kid?


    More vagueness. Small details. What are people doing? Scattered speech out of context helps.

    I wasn't able to think about this, because something bumped into me from
    behind. I nearly fell over—well, not without being grabbed from behind
    as well.


    This sounds a little awkward. Just sayin.

    I looked back. A cute girl had saved me. Her hair was long, and blue,
    and quite silky. And she was more feminine than I was, for sure. She was
    beautiful, all right.


    Very, very vague. Describe her moar. No adjectives this time. Try and use verbs as well. What is her face/ hair/ tits n ass doing that stand out to you?

    I wanted to do some bad things to her....

    Like?
  • Yeah, all those parts looked off to me as well. 

    Thanks for pointing them out. I'll proofread it soon.

    Also, lol at no one noticing that Mikane is driving a car that doesn't exist
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