Lesbian Fiction Thread (NSFW)

IanExMachina

Back Cunt

/nottryingtohelp

All Nines

"inorite"

Yeah. I kind of enjoy the irony of me referring to the thing poop comes out of as "beautiful".

Tushy? Nah, sounds too cute.

MillerCross

Badonkadonk.

I read that as

Madoka Monk

Which then lead me to the idea of Madoka founding a cult around asses. But not the sexy kind. the donkey kind.

All Nines

Pssh. With the character of that show, it should totally be the sexy kind.

MillerCross

hey, not my fault that my brain defuses the idea of sex and anime characters together in the same sentence.

Snappy

So, are all of our lesbian shenanigans going to be in the same story or continuity, or do we want to do short stories that aren't connected at all?

All Nines

I think the original intent was for individuals' short stories, but I don't think Bob would mind a story with continuity that involved us as characters.

MillerCross

I think that if you want to tie in into other people's stories, then you can, but otherwise, I don't see why they should be related.

Also, I won't write. You can use my name, if only because I'd lol. But eh, I'm not good at writing porn. Or anything beyond essays and articles, though.

Snappy

Yeah, I think short stories would be better too

IanExMachina

There once was a lesbo named Bob,

Who hated to ride a man's knob.

She wasn't too fussy,

When it came to pussy,

And loved the taste in her gob.

Snappy

Fussy doesn't right with Pussy.

IanExMachina

^

Use a different accent.

There was a young girl named Snappy,

Who was turned on wearing a nappy.

This isn't at all true,

It's fake through and through,

But the idea would make Chagen happy.

MillerCross

i lol'd

MillerCross

i find the lack of scissoring in that post disturbing.

IanExMachina

There was a poster called Juan

Who went out with nothing on,

The ladies were in shock,

at the sight of his cock,

as it was the size and shape of a swan.

All Nines

I also find the lack of erotic lactation disturbing. And the fact that there are only two.

Bob

Continuity? In my lesbian fiction thread?!

I approve. ^_^

Anywho, I kind of suck, so this is going to suck. Also, it did turn out far more pretentious then I wanted it to, so, sorry bout that. With that out of the way, LESBIAN FICTION GO.

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All I could do was stare into her steely blue eyes
as the words I tried so hard to get out refused to be vocalized. “Marie, I-”
She placed a finger to my lips, cutting me off. “You don’t have to say
anything, Chris. I’ve known about your feelings for me since we first met. I
was never sure of how to say this without sounding awkward, but… I feel the
same way.”

My sheepishness was replaced with pure shock. How
could she, a veritable goddess, possibly be interested in an unkempt tomboy
like me? It didn’t matter, all I knew was that I was going to take full
advantage of the situation. I placed my hand on her hip as I went in for a
kiss, just slowly enough to see how she’d respond. Soon, our lips were locked
as our arms wrapped around each other, refusing to let go. I felt her fingers
graze against my bottom, letting out an instinctive gasp. She merely flashed me a
seductive look as her hand maneuvered itself to my inner thighs. I bit my lip
in anticipation as she began fingering me through my panties. Thinking this
must be what heaven feels like, I moaned and closed my eyes, letting her take
full control.

“Chris…” She whispered my name, her charming accent
making her words sound like a smooth orchestral arrangement. The pleasure left
me speechless, and the only thing I was able to utter were a few contented
groans. “Chris, come…” Her voice trailed off and I had no idea what else she
had, but those two words were the only ones that mattered. Obliging, my moans
became louder as I climaxed, my body feeling like it was melting. I had lost
myself in lust, completely and utterly out of it, leaving me unprepared for
what happened next. “CHRIS WAKE THE FUCK UP, IT’S PAST NOON YOU LAZY BITCH.”
Marie’s voice sounded different. Instead of a soothing French accent, I heard
my roommate Lisa’s voice, which could only mean…

I opened my eyes, my vision slowly getting less
blurry as Lisa’s scowling face came into focus. “Chris, get up! You’re supposed
to help me clean this place! I’m sick of doing all of your work for you! Come
on!” She pulled the blanket off of me, apparently seeing something she wasn’t entirely
ready for. “…Seriously? You’re such a horny little perv.” Confused, I wondered
what she could have meant… before realizing where my hand was. “Uhh… I didn’t…
You know I toss and turn a lot, right?” “Whatever. Here, you fold this and tidy
up the bathroom, I’ll wash the dishes.” She tossed my plush throw blanket on
top of me and made her way out of my room, then stopped. “Actually, just toss
that in with the other dirty clothing and I’ll wash it later. Oh, and don’t
forget to scrub the shower. Again.”
She left as I buried my face in my hands. This was going to be a long day.

Bob

...Wow, the formatting looks like shit when copypasting from word.

Snappy

I plan on putting a lesbian guro story here. DEAL.

Bob

-high fives Snappy-

Snappy

I also want to experiment with more fantastic themes like monster girls.

ClockworkUniverse

Not a guro fan, but I'm into most monster girls.

Bob

Monster girls? Yes please!

So, what kind of guro are we talking here?

Also, as far as what I wrote, any comments? Constructive criticism? Criticism in general? Questions? Insults?

Snappy

I like it Bob. It's cute, and I like the narrative of the main character

Here are my two main ideas.

A college girl, here best friends, and her little sister rent rooms from a extremely wealthy and attractive young girl, while they attend school in the big city. The wealthy mansion owner is actually an eccentric and sadistic lesbian that uses her wealthy to invite pretty girls into her home and play sexual mind games and experiments on them, which eventually turns into toture and genetic mutation, before killing them. But this time she is dealing with three interesting girls that want to live. Will they survive and make it out alive?

After a terrible virus kills all men on the planet, and turns a lot of women into bloodthirsty zombies, a ragtag bunch of young girls band together to fight off the horde and travel across the country to California, where the government has rumored to created a gigantic suppository of all the stored sperm in the world. Along the way they bond, fight, learn to love and learn a little about themselves. It's mostly comedic and action, plenty of sex of course, and contains some futa.

All Nines

^^ The first thing I can think of is that the quotation style was nonstandard, and thus read rather strangely.

Also, "horny little perv" struck me as slightly redundant, though that could be left up to character imperfection. And it might be me, but I'm a little worn of pretty women being referred to as goddesses.

Otherwise, pretty good erotica.

Bob

^I'm not entirely sure what you mean by quotation style (I'm a little slow today, forgive me). I agree with the horny little perv thing, but it's part of Lisa's character. Imagine the Department of Redundancy Department, only in human form. Same with the goddess thing. Marie's nowhere near as perfect as Chris believes (and she'll find this out later), but Chris is still in that "Oh god she's so perfect in every way" phase.

Also, thanks!

^^Are those separate stories or the same? I love the first one!

Snappy

Separate stories. And yeah, I was gonna write the first one first.

All Nines

^^ Putting dialogue from multiple characters within the same paragraph, rather than starting a new one when a different person speaks.

And you're welcome.

Bob

Oh, that. I'll be sure to keep that in mind because I'm too lazy to go back and fix the part I just wrote. Thanks!

Chagen

"After a terrible virus kills all men on the planet, and turns a lot of women into bloodthirsty zombies, a ragtag bunch of young girls band together to fight off the horde and travel across the country to California, where the government has rumored to created a gigantic suppository of all the stored sperm in the world. Along the way they bond, fight, learn to love and learn a little about themselves. It's mostly comedic and action, plenty of sex of course, and contains some futa."

Okay, this plot is goddamn ridiculous I can't find it entertaining. Not even in a B-Movie way. 

And yes, I have designated myself to be the thread killjoy.