IJBM Super Fun Time Writing Game

All Nines

I don't follow.

Forzare

Like, when it's your turn, instead of getting the whole story, you would have just gotten Dark Decapodian's post.

All Nines

Ah. I wasn't sure what Ian was referring to.

Yeah, we should do that, then.

Waltzy

Ooh that sounds like fun~

Vivi

Ah, that does sound fun. And it's a bit easier on me.

Vivi

That idea actually sounds really good.

So, for the next little story, instead of being given the entire story up to your part, you will only be given the last person's part, for extra fun. The last person will be told their part is the ending and that is it.

Can I assume everyone who signed up for the last one would like to be in this part?

Counterclock

Here for round two

nohaynicklibre

Me too me too.

Also this came out pretty good

dmboogie

ROUND TWO, FIGHT!

IanExMachina

I'm here for round 2.

Waltzy

Same~

All Nines

I'll be around for it, too.

Malkavian

MALKAVIAN HAS JOINED THE SECOND ROUND.

Schitzo

SIGN ME UP!!

Vorpy

Kaboom

Vorpy

Hardcore Necro

Malkavian

Okay, I finally read it now that I'm at a computer and here are some thoughts.

1) Holy crap, what I set up as a despondent coming-of-age romance suddenly turned into a psychosexual horror story.

2)I feel embarrassed for my part considering how strong certain parts were, especially Waltzy's and Vorpy's.

3)A lot of sections were longer than I thought we should have put. Is there any rule-of-thumb limit?

Waltzy

I liked your part though, it was short and sweet and even before I knew it was yours I found myself particularly liking that section.

I worried that my part was too long. XD

Counterclock

My part was too short, I'll have to add onto that,

Vivi

There was no minimum or maximum.

Bob

I'm down for round two. Also,

I feel embarrassed for my part considering how strong certain parts were, especially Waltzy's and Vorpy's.

Counterclock

I feel soo embarrassed!

Gomen Nasai Bob-kun, why didn't you tell me we could be super fun and have that?

You've betrayed me!

nohaynicklibre

My part is poop,but then again I'm no writer

DarkDecapodian

Sign me up for the cast of Writing Game 2: Child-of-Indeterminate-Sex of Writing Game.

On reading the whole story, I too must conclude that my part is somewhat outshone by others (dayum, Vorpy, where'd you go?), but I like to flatter myself that I did a fair bit to form the shape of the psychosexual horror that Counterclock and Forzare began.

All Nines

I feel like my section was a little too long, as well. Or at least too condensed. And I admit that the part I wrote wasn't very interesting compared to later, but I didn't want to risk making too drastic a change and altering the entire feel of the story, so I went with it. And I feel like my writing is kinda beige (to the General Writing Discussion thread!). The writing overall is pretty solid, though, I think.

dmboogie

My part was way too short, but it did change the story quite a bit...

Vorpy

I wasn't expecting to be last. I was assuming I would be in the middle and invoke some Mood Whiplash, but an ending is fine too.

Also that ending was based off of an old shipping fanfic I wrote anyway.

Vivi

I have the prompt I want to do for the next one. It's based on a movie script I've been writing. It should be interesting to see how my intro is changed. And I really like the idea of showing the next person in the cycle only the last person's paragraph.

Bob

Also that ending was based off of an old shipping fanfic I wrote anyway.

This may be the first time I've actually wanted to read a shipping fanfic.

Forzare

I'm up for round two.