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  • $80+ per session
    I think Vorpy is 3 hours behind me, So it should be about 11AM for her.

    And it was looking quite good Ian. It started out tame, got a little weird, took a random turn, then got crazy. Now Vorpy just has to finish us off.
  • WHERE THE FUCK IS IT VORPY
  • Kichigai birthday!!
    Meanwhile, Vorpy is sending the manuscript to an editor and planning to flee to Switzerland with the money
  • I am Dr. Ned who is totally not Dr. Zed in disguise.
    Under the pseudonym 'Dan Brown',
  • $80+ per session
    Now it's being made into a movie.
  • I am Dr. Ned who is totally not Dr. Zed in disguise.
    The most important part is when it gets made into a post for this thread!
  • Till shade is gone, till water is gone, into the Shadow with teeth bared, screaming defiance with the last breath, to spit in Sightblinder’s eye on the last Day.
    WHERE IS IT.

    Am I going to have to choke a bitch?
  • I wanna see too. ;/////;
  • I am Dr. Ned who is totally not Dr. Zed in disguise.
    YEAH

    *waves ban hammer in a threatening and abuseofpower way*
  • $80+ per session
    Everyone attack Vorpy.
  • edited 2011-08-27 19:17:14
    Has friends besides tanks now
    -grabs pitchfork and torch-

    -ponders, hand on chin-

    -writes "modly pitchfork" on pitchfork-

    -puts out fire started by the torch that was laid down and picks up torch-

    ONWARD!

    [Seriously, though, Vorpy, are you having trouble with this? If so, feel free to say so.]
  • ☭Unstoppable Sex Goddess☭
    Found the thread again. I made the mistake of auto-saving the .txt file in my Gajillion amounts of text files folder, and then forgetting it's name. I'm on page 6 of my text files so I should find my draft soon and post it. It was kind of long so I need to edit it some more. :(
  • Kichigai birthday!!
    Hey Vorpy, I hope you aren't having much cold there in the Alps.

    Oh why would you? You have a pool of money to bathe in after all
  • I am Dr. Ned who is totally not Dr. Zed in disguise.
    *waves the banhammer in a hurry up motion.*
  • Till shade is gone, till water is gone, into the Shadow with teeth bared, screaming defiance with the last breath, to spit in Sightblinder’s eye on the last Day.
    -wishes he had a banhammer or something equally threatening to wave-
  • I am Dr. Ned who is totally not Dr. Zed in disguise.
    *passes Forzare a genuine replica 1967 banhammer*
  • ☭Unstoppable Sex Goddess☭
    Done. Now all we need is for Vivi to do things with it.
  • Till shade is gone, till water is gone, into the Shadow with teeth bared, screaming defiance with the last breath, to spit in Sightblinder’s eye on the last Day.
    :D
  • ☭Unstoppable Sex Goddess☭
    I tried to keep the story within it's general theme rather than explode it into one of my own stories or derail it, since it was the ending.
  • Till shade is gone, till water is gone, into the Shadow with teeth bared, screaming defiance with the last breath, to spit in Sightblinder’s eye on the last Day.
    This thing was coherent enough to have a theme?  :O
  • Has friends besides tanks now
    It at least stayed within one setting for a while I was writing for it. As for a "theme", I can't say. :?
  • We'll see how it turns out.
  • $80+ per session
    Saturn

    Every year it's the same thing. My idiotic brother debates which
    fireworks to use, always going with the ones that will blow more of his
    hand off, and my girlfriend slaves away in the kitchen, baking those
    horrible star shaped cookies. I swear she makes them with fucking bleach
    or something. These kids of mine, Julie and Taylor, pile on to me while
    I'm trying to watch the one good thing on TV during the holidays,
    asking for another freakin' story.



    "Fine, kids. I'll tell you about a little story about when I was a kid, a time full of magic and wonder."



    "Is this a sad story, Daddy?"



    "No, you stupid child. This is a very happy story."



    And so, I told them the story of the most horrible experience of my
    life, and how it made me the man I am today. This story is not for the
    faint of heart, which is why I'm telling it to two second graders.


    Malvakian

    It was the summer 1996 in Seattle. Even two years later the absence of
    Kurt Cobain resonated with all of us as though he might as well have
    blown his brains out right on stage. In his place we had this Bill
    Clinton guy with his saxophone and his Southern charm, in a way an
    ironic mirror of what would come later. As Heart Shaped Box played on
    the jukebox and I nursed my Gin and Tonic, I noticed a the girl who
    decided to sit two bar stools away from me. There stood a woman who I
    could not describe as beautiful, hideous, gorgeous, repulsive, or in
    between. All I could describe this woman as was the personification of
    the Zeitgeist. This woman was the nineties.


    Forzare


    Though there was nothing special about this completely ordinary woman, I
    found myself strangely drawn to her. As I approached her, nervous, but
    with an almost unnatural lack of inhibition (thanks to the alcohol),
    images flashed through my mind, almost as if they were a psychic
    premonition; scenes of the two of us getting married, of having
    children, of growing old together, and of doing it like bunnies.



    Not necessarily in that order.



    As I drew near, she smiled at me, sexy and alluring. But there was
    something off about that smile, and I began to suspect something.,, but
    it was only when she seemed to sprout great black bat wings that I
    realized that I'd forgotten to take my medication that morning.


    Counterclock

    I knew of the possible consequences of continuing with that night, but
    not even I would be fully aware of the repercussions that ensued. All
    that was on my mind was that woman's smile, still luring me closer and
    closer to her. Reality was blending into madness as I continued toward
    that smile, like a beacon in the night.



    It wasn't until I was close up to her that I forgot all about the primal fears that spawned from the setting at hand.


    DarkDecapodian

    'So, come here often?' the smile said, lips drawn in a knowing smirk.
    And didn't her teeth, in that moment, look just a little too sharp?

    'Sure do. I'd say by now that Jackie knows my order better than he does
    his own.' I replied, indicating the balding, sallow tender at the far
    end of the bar. My hands felt clammy to the touch, but this was the most
    excitement I'd felt in a long time.

    'You certainly seem at home here.' The woman replied. She leaned in
    closer, her smirk deepening. 'I wonder if you can guess what mine is?'

    'Hell of a way to introduce yourself' I said. chuckling weakly. A light
    in the furthest corner of the bar flickered momentarily. 'Okay, what is
    it?'.

    'Oh no, you have to guess it.' The woman replied. 'I'll make it worth
    your while. If you answer correctly I'll...' here she paused, her face
    forming into a self-knowing parody of desire. '...I'll buy your next
    round'.

    'Long odds, but I'll have a go.' I said. Sitting back, I studied my new
    acquaintance. Her clothes, her haircut, even her purse belonged entirely
    to the here and now. Nothing that truly belonged to the fashion
    magazines, the latest music scene or whatever stupid sitcom was
    currently fizzling on TV, but undeniably Zeitgeist.

    (and oh god her figure)

    Within my vision, yet beyond it, the flickering light blew. Jackie
    grizzled to himself and went into the back room to get a replacement.

    'A Long Island Iced Tea.' I said.

    She shook her head and laughed.

    'Zima? Bacardi? Corona?'

    'Wrong on all counts.' She laughed. 'You're paying your own way tonight, friend.'

    I slumped over my drink in mock disappointment. The next light along
    started to flicker. For a moment, I was convinced I saw a large, black
    spider crawl along the bar, but it vanished when the light turned back
    on properly. This place was really going to shit.

    'What is it then?' I asked.


    Everest

    'What, you can't see the glass in front of me? Come on.' This time she
    laughed a little too loudly, turning a couple heads. Even Jackie
    couldn't help himself when he came back with a replacement bulb. 'It's a
    screwdriver.' I looked at the part of the table that was in front of
    her. There was a yellow-orange drink there, mostly untouched. Imagine
    that.

    'Hmm,' she said. 'I take it you also haven't noticed the spider on your shoulder?'

    I turned my head to the right. Nothing there. But when I tapped my left
    shoulder, I felt something in my hair. I slapped the back of my head a
    little too hard, to kill it. I fell forward and she only just caught me
    before I took her down with me.

    'Fuck. My head.' The chorus of laughs in the bar wasn't helping, either.
    At least I got a peek down her shirt. She seemed to notice, but she
    also didn't seem to mind.

    'Well,' she said. 'If you're this quirky after a glass or two, I hope you'll toss back a few more.'

    'Ugh,' I said. 'I've had more than two glasses, I think. Cut me some
    slack.' I looked at the crushed spider on my right hand and shook it
    off, onto the floor. Well, most of it. I wiped the last of its guts off
    with my handkerchief as best I could. Once I was done wiping, I couldn't
    even tell there had been a mess at all.

    'Here, let me help you with that,' she said. Fuck, I thought. When did I
    knock back so many drinks? She grabbed my handkerchief and rubbed my
    hand pretty hard. I got a friction burn, but my hand did look much
    cleaner, if redder, I'll give her that.

    'We've known each other for three minutes and you've already given me a
    whole night's worth of entertainment,' she said. I felt her mocking me
    with her tone of voice, just a little, but I let it slide. 'Could I get
    your name?' As she said that, another light blew out.


    IanExMachina

    Before I had chance to reply, it all went dark.

    With the darkness came silence.

    I tried to move but felt nothing, I tried to cry out but the silence was all pervading.



    I have no idea how long I sat in darkness.



    It was a relief when light slowly started to return, along with faint feeling in my limbs.



    I reached up to rub my eyes and felt a sudden pain in my forehead and my
    vision fail, causing me to fall off my barstool with a loud cry of
    'FUCK'.



    When the pain has dissipated I carefully raised my hands to my face.



    I spent the next chunk of time torn between retching and crying.



    The ends of my arms no longer were familiar to me, instead of my worn
    hands were grotesque stumps with sharpened fragments of bones sticking
    out the malformed flesh.



    When I'd regained what little composure I could I realized the bar was silent, apart from my pitiful whimpers.



    nohaynicklibre

    I wandered for a bit,trying to make up the fuzzy memories in my head.
    All the drinks,the flirting;clumsy in my part,playful in hers,the people
    in the bar;who now were all vanished,that spider whose remains were now
    nowhere to be found,everything.



    At first,I thought it was all product of my drunkenness,and that I was
    in one of those situations you often see in movies where a loser stays
    drinking in a bar until morning and the bartender has to kick him out
    while he vomits in his shoes.



    Unfortunately, I checked my watch. It was 1:45, that is, barely 5 minutes after I started talking to her.



    That girl! Where was she? I didn't give a shit about the rest of the
    people in the bar,not even Jackie (to be honest, I felt a bit relieved I
    didn't have to pay the drinks)



    I grabbed the shotgun that laid under the bar,next to the fridge,just in case.



    Walking to the door,staggering my way to it,I was wondering what the
    hell I was going to do to find her. I had to ask her so many questions
    that I didn't even know at that moment.



    And I still had to tell her my name.


    The_Edge

    Stumbling down the alleyway between Jackie's and the income tax place
    next door, I made my way to the street. Darkness seemed to glare around
    me. The coldness of the shotgun in my hands faded as numbness took my
    hands. Each step was like walking with a hundred dollars in pennies in
    each sock and I wasn't even wearing socks. I labored onto the sidewalk.
    Not a soul was around. Not even a whore. I went for my car accross the
    street. I was in no shape for driving, but I didn't know think that at
    the time. I took out my keys and fumbled with them and the shotgun as I
    unlocked my car. I tossed the gun in the passenger side and fell into
    the driver's side. I slamed the door and put the keys in the ignition.
    Before I could start the car, I felt a presence in the back seat. I
    turned find a spider behind me. I grabbed for the shotgun before I
    noticed sitting to the spider's left was a woman in a black spider
    webbed veil.


    Waltzy

    "Who are you?" I blurted, completely on edge by this point. She looked
    similar to someone I might have seen very recently but the veil had me
    baffled.



    She ignored me and lit a cigarette, and let the spider nibble the ash
    off the end before putting it to her lips and taking a long drag,
    breathing out furls of warm smoke into the small car.



    "Whoever you are, I don't like bugs in my car-" Her hand shot out and
    grabbed me by the front of my collar, and with a wicked fast motion she
    dragged me into the back and pinned me to the seats. She smiled and
    something about her teeth tugged my memory. My heart was racing as she
    leaned closer, her bright red lips smelling of lipstick and maybe
    something else. The spider crawled up her shoulder and perched there,
    most of its beady eyes fixed on me.



    "My little pet is not a -bug-." She spat venomously, before lovingly
    reaching to stroke the abdomen of the spider with her middle and ring
    fingers. "And now you're going to guess -his- favorite drink."



    "I-I uh-" I stammered lamely, terror having pierced my heart.



    "Here. You may have a hint." The spider crept down her arm and across my
    chest, the hairs on its thick legs grazing my throat. I thought I was
    done for.



    Suddenly, it stopped. The veiled woman looked as confused as I was, before a charming sneer curled her bright red lips.



    "Oh my. That's embarrassing. When not even my pet thinks you're worth
    eating." A shrill, cruel laugh filled my ears as I watched the spider
    return quickly to its perch atop her shoulder.


    Schitzo

    I couldn't help but feel somewhat embarrassed. Were I not in a drunken
    haze, I could have mustered up the strength to maybe shove her weight
    off of my hips and into the front seats. The best I could do is fondle
    her by accident. My hands, if you can call them such anymore, now
    resembled that of a crane game's claw, but with my grip being far more
    limpwristed. Though her veil obscured her eyes, her knowing smirk
    continued through the awkward silence.



    "So," I ask "What now?"



    Her only reply is an escalating chuckle. She points her finger straight
    at my face as her chuckle turns into a wheezing cackle. She runs this
    finger down my nose, lips and chin, and heads further down my chest.


    dmboogie

    I loose all feeling in my limbs. I try to lift my arm, move my leg, even move a finger.



    Nothing. Only my eyes can still move. "Why, I am going to take you home,
    of course!" The spider-woman cackles as the world fades away. "Isn't
    that what you're supposed to do with men you meet in bars?"



    When I come to, I am in a dark cellar. I still can't feel my body. Even
    my drunken mind thinks that this is strange. Shouldn't whatever was
    keeping me still have worn off by now? I look down.



    I have no body.


    Bob

    I try to scream, to cry out, to say something, but no sound escapes my
    lips. I try moving my mouth just to reassure myself that I still have
    lips, the results making me think the worse. I no longer feel like
    myself, feeling instead like a character in a glitchy video game, frozen
    as if my entire world is paused. I blink, and when I open my eyes I see
    a pair of vaguely familiar bright-red floating disembodied lips a few
    feet from my face. They begin to speak in a language I've never heard
    before, the voice sounding like a cross between Zalgo, Cthulhu, Satan
    and Madonna. The only words I am able to make out are "mine" and "melt".
    I try in vain to gulp, fearing the worst.


  • $80+ per session
    Vorpy

    There was a unsettling mixture of peace and horror as the lips unlock
    and her soft pink tongue wiggles out, poking against my face as the
    feeling of the sticky saliva begins to allow the feeling of skin and
    bones resonate through my body. It's her at least. Everything remains
    black but it lightens up just enough for me to see shapes, strange
    dimensionless shapes, only vaguely feminine above me. I can feel my
    eyes, but nothing else. I try to force my arms to move but nothing that
    feels like an arm responds to my movements.





    Distorted guttural noises echo all around me, deforming the fabric of
    the darkness around me into shades of ruddy gray and a color with no
    name that I cannot for the life of me describe. There was a sickening
    rhythm to it all. Then I began to feel the tips of my toes begin to
    burn, and then the bones in my legs. My entire skeleton was being
    roasted from what it felt like, and then I began to have the feeling of a
    body return to me.





    The sickness in my head and in my incorporeal guts began to return. My
    haze remained there and I had little to no idea what the hell was going
    on around me, but then the distortion and the guttural echos began to
    sound more human, more female, and then the sickening thoughts and
    contractions began to emerge as I felt my waist sink down against the
    concrete, or what felt like concrete. The depraved breathing she was
    emitting was getting louder, and my skin began to chafe and rip against
    whatever stone surface I was laying upon.





    My fingernails felt cold as death, and I felt my blood sluggishly coarse
    through my body as it sarcastically informed me I was in the middle of a
    sexual act through sending dizzying pain throughout my body. I looked
    around and I could see the blue of the 4:00 am sky, and what appeared to
    be that woman, happily bouncing atop me with her veil cloaking her sex
    face from me as I could feel the cold breathing spark my chest.





    Then I heard frogs. Frogs everywhere. At first there was one ribbit.
    Then there was droves, hundreds of shrill ribbits surrounding me as the
    pressure on my groin suddenly stopped, and I felt the woman atop of me
    begin to panic a bit. She quickly got up from me and the darkness
    suddenly vanished, and I could see clearly again. There was a garbage
    bag over my head the entire time, and the stink of my breath was getting
    me sick.





    She picked me up by my collar and drug me behind her like a very large
    suitcase, my hands dragging through wood shavings and my fingernails
    sliding painfully across the concrete as the frogs got louder. I looked
    around and didn't see them anywhere. "Where the hell are we going?" I
    spoke up, trying to figure out what just happened in the last couple
    moments since I "woke up". She didn't answer me but continued to
    frantically drag me backward.





    And then the frogs came. They were very vigorous, pouring out of the
    broken concrete like water and storming angrily at us, vicious gray
    colored frogs with hats. Tiny little gatsbys sat atop their head as they
    began spewing the ribbits out more angrily than before.





    The woman then tossed me into a black car and closed the door, climbing
    over the seat I was laying awkwardly in and getting in the driver's
    seat, turning on the car and then hitting the gas so hard I heard the
    muffler explode for a few seconds befor we zipped off from the field we
    were in. It was like a giant parking lot, covered in pipes that looked
    vaguely like worms, giant black domes could be seen in the distance, and
    giant stone spheres floating in the air that were tied down with
    chains.





    "Would it be too much to ask you what is going on here?" looking at her,
    now puffing on a cigarette as she angrily drove around on the concrete,
    the tsunami of frogs getting larger and larger, but further away from
    us. "I was planning on trying to have sex with you while you were drunk,
    but then you woke up so I am bringing you back to the bar." I looked at
    her confused. "....what is with the frogs wearing hats, and the
    surreal scenery going on right now?"





    She scoffed and look at me, now having a pipe in her mouth. "You are
    more worried about that than having a complete stranger extort sex out
    of you?"





    We began to hit some bumps along the way and drive down a hill, to
    something that looked vaguely like a sewage drain. She hit the gas, and
    we drove around 88 miles down this hole and fell into the darkness.





    When I woke up, I was in a house, laying in a bed once again. I looked
    around and saw her, again. This time though, she looked a little less
    grim, less burlesque. More civilized, running her finger across my chest
    being covered only in silky ebony sheets. "You left the gift of life in
    side of me, you know..." she coyly said. The only thing I could
    possibly muster up to say thanks to all of these developments was...





    "You don't have a name, do you?" I spoke.





    She giggled a bit, those seductive eyes locking onto mine as she took a
    small breath. "Are you hungry? I could make some cookies for you if you
    don't mind" she said. I stood up and got out of the bed, completely
    naked. I walked around and went to the window, opening it up. There
    wasn't anything outside of that window except a grass yard. There was a
    large fence, but from what it looked like, there was nothing interesting
    beyond it. Just empty gray nothingness. I didn't have the urge to look
    beyond anything other than that anymore. I ceased being confused long
    ago, and simply went "what the hell. Might as well." Just going along
    with whatever this was. Regardless if it's fake or not, what could I do?





    I just sat down on the bed, and she slithered over and sat on my lap,
    calmly mentioning "We are going to have a family now. You, me, and my
    little pet."





    Julie and Taylor just sat there, in awe of the story I just told them.
    They had the most precious looks on their faces, that resonated the
    horror and confusion I felt when I went through the hell that it took to
    even make them. They looked at me, with their 8 beady eyes as they
    refused to say anything more, and I laughed heartily as I picked them
    up, and put them back in the terrarium.





    "Now now, I gave you your story, now go to bed. I want to watch my
    show." They scurried about in the 8 foot glass box I made for them, and
    they nested in the straw, quickly going to sleep.





    "Stupid bugs." I muttered to myself, pulling back the recliner as I
    munched on this disgusting starfish cookie, turning the pictures of my
    girlfriend and her little pet backwards as I flicked through the
    channels.
  • AHHHH I LOVE THE ENDING~~!
  • edited 2011-08-27 21:57:05
    Has friends besides tanks now
    I haven't read it in full yet, but I suppose now I see how it took Vorpy so long to submit her "paragraph".

    EDIT: XD
  • Till shade is gone, till water is gone, into the Shadow with teeth bared, screaming defiance with the last breath, to spit in Sightblinder’s eye on the last Day.
    That ending was perfect.
  • I am Dr. Ned who is totally not Dr. Zed in disguise.
    The only improvement/suggestion I'd make is:

    Only give the person writing the last paragraph written not everyone elses.
  • Till shade is gone, till water is gone, into the Shadow with teeth bared, screaming defiance with the last breath, to spit in Sightblinder’s eye on the last Day.
    We should do that for round two!  :D
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