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I started a new webcomic, and the first page is now up :D

IcalasariIcalasari
edited 2012-05-25 00:12:36 in Webspace
No rainbow star

I got permission from INUH to make the thread


Here is the link to it


Critics? How badly does it make eyes burn?

Comments

  • ClockworkUniverseClockworkUniverse
    OOOooooOoOoOOoo, I'm a ghoOooOooOOOost!

    The author of this Web Comic has not uploaded any comics yet.


  • IcalasariIcalasari
    No rainbow star

    Problem should be fixed


     


    Guess it glitched and refused to change the release time I set...

  • ClockworkUniverseClockworkUniverse
    edited 2012-05-25 01:04:45
    OOOooooOoOoOOoo, I'm a ghoOooOooOOOost!

    It's not the best art I've ever seen or anything, but when compared to other first pages of webcomics, even ones that now have amazingly good art, it's somewhat above average. It'll improve.

  • IcalasariIcalasari
    No rainbow star

    Well that's good news, at least

  • SchitzoSchitzo
    They're somethin' else.

    Also don't care much for the art, but I'm interested to see more. Keep it up :D

  • IcalasariIcalasari
    No rainbow star
    ^ I will keep it up, and also plan to update past pages if there is a large enough gap in quality between first and latest



    Any advice on where I can improve the art?
  • SchitzoSchitzo
    They're somethin' else.

    I suppose that depends. What overall look and mood do you want to go for?

  • IcalasariIcalasari
    No rainbow star
    A balance between drama and comedy, and the style of the characters is a sort of Rayman style - no arms, detached heads, POTENTIALLY no legs (haven't decided if there will be legs under the pants or not), and detached hands, feet, tails, wings, etc.



    Everything is simplified and streamlined - no fingers show unless they are needed, for example, and the most complex parts would be the heads



    Backgrounds I plan to do a much better job on in the future and make them more detailed. I may also switch to my tablet for detail work, but I think I'll stick with a mouse for the outlines and such - more control



    I plan to also make my own font ASAP, unless this one is seen as good



    And I found my old strips from mid March 2010... Yeah, I've improved
  • SchitzoSchitzo
    They're somethin' else.

    Then in that case, you're doing alright. You will definitely improve as your work goes on. Though I haven't seen enough to comment, make sure you do well to have everyone emote exactly the way you'd like them to.

  • IcalasariIcalasari
    No rainbow star
    ^ If I'm ever unsure of an emotion, I usually google it. So that shouldn't be hard



    I do look forward to the improving part. At least it's better than my first attempt
  • SchitzoSchitzo
    They're somethin' else.

    Heh, I see. Have fun with it, Icalasari :D

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